Correction

This summer I was lucky to visit two parts very different from Chili, the desert of Atacama and the Valdiviana jungle. These two parts are wonderful and the two places are very spetial, but my favorite place was the Valdiviana jungle. In January I visited the Oncol Park, this is a park in the center of the jungle of Valdivia in the "Cordillera de la costa" and also in the "Pangüipulli" lake. I visit this site whit my boyfriend,We were____ ten days, we did treking all days, one day we did treking with guides who showed___the local fauna, we went to swim to the lake and vegetation and other day we did kayak. This site is priviliged because from there you can see more than nine volvanes, rives, the jungle and sea all__the same time.The truth is that I am charmed with me this place, because there is nothing that I like_________the trees the green one and the animals... And with a better good company.

After...

This summer I was lucky to visit two parts very different from Chili, the desert of Atacama and the Valdivian jungle. These two parts are wonderful and the two places are very spetial, but my favorite place was the Valdivian jungle. In January I visited the Oncol Park, this is a park in the center of the jungle of Valdivia in the "Cordillera de la costa" and also in the "Pangüipulli" lake. I visited this site with my boyfriend,We were there for ten days, we did treking everyday, one day we did treking with guides who showed us the local fauna, we went to swim to the lake and vegetation and other day we did kayak. This site is priviliged because from there you can see more than nine volvanes, rives, the jungle and sea all_at_the same time.The truth is that I am charmed with this place, because there is nothing that I like more than the trees the green and the animals... And it’s better in good company.